Tradition - Comments

If anyone has better suggestions for names, I'd be only too happy to oblige XD

This story is very well written and I especially like the feisty female lead. The only thing negative I have to say is to remember to put spaces between all your paragraphs. If not, then it starts to hurt the reader's eyes after awhile. Other than that, very well done and impressive for a first stoey:)

I love this introduction to the story. Giving enough to understand what appears to be happening but also leaves enough to make the reader want more.
Very nice start. Can't wait to see what's next.

What an interesting summary! It definitely drew me in to the story. I've never read much about assassins, but they interest me.

I love your first chapter. Though at times I had to reread to understand who was doing what, I felt that this was a very action packed chapter that made me want to find out what happened next. It was captivating and slightly humorous at the end.

I've subscribed and recommended.
Please update soon! =D