August 8th, 2013 at 03:43am
This is a wonderful story. You have an amazing way of giving the details and secrets at the exactly right time. I have a thing about details, so this story close to perfect if not perfect. I love the way you write. It has a since of simplicity that would be able to make it so much more believable. I love it. The way you write makes it hard to wait for me. I had a hard time stepping away from the computer to get me something to drink. I wanted to know what was going to happen next. I guess that's what happens when I find a good read.
I love how you portray the characters. You make them seem just like people. I know a few people who act like Lacey which just seems to make her an actual person. I love how you don't make Jay out to be a typical supernatural creature like a vampire or a shifter. I like the way it seems that he doesn't really know what he is when it comes to the supernatural part.
The layout is wonderful. It's not too much. I love that it's easy to the eyes. Layouts for the stories on here is just an added bonus for me. I also happen to love the summary. It gives a sense of attraction to me at least to what to know what the story is actually like. I has some sort of flair that is wonderful. You are an amazing writer. I can't wait to read more.
Thank you oh so much!!! I appriciate that a lot!! Made my night! :)