Wow that was amazing! You can just feel the emoshion in this. Its so sad how that everyone has a love like that, in a way.. kinda sorta. I mean I know I do, and he's all i can think about right now...
July 17th, 2013 at 07:34am
I can really feel the emotion in this piece, and I think it's so relevant because we can all relate to an unrequited love, even if it's not quite like this. What I particularly loved about this was that it was kind of like watching from an outside POV, just the way you made the narrator so disconnected from the scene. But at the same time you added substantial details like the not-so-perky breasts.
On a side note: I know both an Abby and David who used to be together, but I just realized that and now this is slightly awkward