Half Stoned - Comments

Personally, I think even though this is quite vague, I think it works very well like that. Like, the lack of back story and whatnot, really fits. I've read plenty of other one shots and drabbles where they were not planned to be extended but probably should have been because the detail was much too vague to the point where you basically would need more to get what had transpired in the story. For this though, I feel like the simplicity and minimal detail fit it well.

Your description itself is great. I was able to visualize the boys and the room inside the shack really well. Oh and also, going along with the minimal thing, I think the layout also fit perfectly. It's simple, not flashy or anything, and I also think it really sets the atmosphere for the story.

Dear God woman you have to expand on this!!!! It was so amazing and yet extremely vague! I want to know more more more! A+ on adding the brownie points compadre. I definitely enjoyed this.

and sorry I went on an unannounced hiatus and am just now getting to this. My apologies.