I am in so much love with this! You're an amazing writer! And I haver come across such a wonderfully detailed and good flowing story. I'm highly impressed and cant wait to read more(:
"Fred, am I ever going to have a nice moment in my life that you don't ruin?" / "Not until I'm dead and buried, my dear." Oh god, Fred, why?! I actually almost started to cry. This is my favorite Harry Potter fanfiction. Keep doing what you do best. This is truly wonderful.
Those last few paragraphs may have gotten me a bit teary eyed. Brilliant update as always. I'm excited/worried to see what will happen with George and Amelia after their holiday break.
You honestly pick such great guys in your fan-fictions - I was very excited to see that this was a Weasley twin story.
The title is so fitting, of course, and once again, your setting is perfect. The way the story progresses with the actual HP timeline is so natural and reminds me of how easily the time passes in the novels too.
I love the friendship between the twins and Amelia. You really get that feeling that these are people who've known each other forever and are just so comfortable together. I must admit though, the hinting with George when they snuggled was adorable and I squealed a little. You hooked me.
Amelia's group of friends is really well developed. They each have very distinct personalities and interact like normal teenagers (including the sex and alcohol, of course). The situation between Amelia and Dale, then the fallout with George was so realistic and heart breaking.
Like my comment on Phobia, you do need to proof-read more carefully, take out the links in the story section, and sort out the formatting. It really pales in comparison to the strength of your characters and plot though. This story is a delight to read and just the way you capture Hogwarts is beautiful - from Neville and his plants, to McGonagall, Umbridge, Hermione...and it's all so wonderfully entwined with your own new characters and such.
Amelia's passion for the Order and trauma over her mother is so well done. The teenage angst when she compares her mother's death to Neville's parents still in St Mungo's is so tragically accurate. She's so loyal and not afraid to make a stand, and it's just kickass.
This is a truly awesome story. You should be very proud.