Be Mine. - Comments

  • jcov

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    Damn, that was some good ass drabble right there! Your word choices are fascinating and the way you narrarate the story just kicks so much ass. I love how these two people just keep coming together when problems in their lives arise. No matter what their problems are, they depend on each other to numb the pain. But in the end, she decides to move on with her life and leave the other broken, which I find to be heartbreaking. One can find the will to move on, which is good for her, but then the other one is unable to let go and it breaks my heart to think about that!
    February 5th, 2013 at 03:35am
  • JustDuckie

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    this was great, i loved it!
    November 18th, 2012 at 07:35pm