Black Damask - Comments

I wish the ending were a bit more detailed because it felt a little skipped through but I loved the whole story all the same <3

@ ElegantFalcon
It took a while to write but I'm happy with the ending :)

And that is why The RockshowChick got to have the last chapter. It came out so much better than my ending.

The seqeul should be something like they run into each other and devin gets anna to fall in love with him again. I can't wait for the sequel!<3

I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm hooked omg! It's amazing:3

updateeee omg

@ TheRockshowChick
Sounds good. Enjoy our time off.

@ ElegantFalcon
It's alright, good luck to the 2 essays you have to write.
I'll be updating more since I'm now on holidays until the last day in January :)

@ TheRockshowChick
Unfortunately it's going to be a few days before I can get the chapter written, since I have 2 essays to write for finals week next week, but it'll give me time to think of something good, and you can get some work done on Breathe.
and you're welcome for getting to help write this story. You've written some great chapters

@ ElegantFalcon
No worries, I can't wait until I read the next chapter your writing :D
I love your writing and I have to thank you again for letting me write Devin's parts for this story :) <3

Chapter 14 is now my favorite chapter. Thank you, TheRockshowChick

loving this!

@ TheRockshowChick
Thanks. I still need to go back and read what I wrote. Glad you have things to write about, especially after the chapter that kind of left you on your own. Your chapters have been great too. I'm glad you volunteered for the part.

This is awesome cant wait for an update

Yess! They finally told each other!!!!! <3 Cant wait for more!

I thought I should comment on our story :)
I actually love the way you write & I love how you write Anna.
The last chapter made sense and I thought it was was amazing!
I have stuff to write about now for Devin's chapter & I should be able to hopefully write the next chapter tomorrow after school :)
Thank you for letting me be co-author, I love working with you and hopefully this story becomes popular :D
<3

I hope he tells her soon because I think they would look cute together. Update asap <3

This looks like it will be good. More soon.

I already like the story so far. Update ASAP! <3

great start!