Exhale - Comments

Hey! I like this story a lot. I'm sorry that your co-author quit, though I think you did well as Emily without her. However, if you'd like to continue with a co-author, I'd be interested in taking over. I've had a bit of experience in writing femmeslash. I love this story so far, and I think it would be amazing to help with it.

Love it :)

Unique and relatable, I love it !^-^

I love it! Please update soon. :)

Emily so likes her ;}
I CAN'T FREAKING WAIT.
That might've been the rest you've ever written (;

I normally don't like femmeslash, but this is different (in a good way!). So far, I really like Bentley.

I just read the first chapter; it's really good so far :)

I love it, can't wait for more!:)

I am liking this so far. I can already relate to it. Not to mention I haven't read an OC Femmeslash in a while. Its a rare thing on mibba. : ) I can not wait for more and see where its going to go.

Ah the first chapter was just as amazing as I thougt it would be. Emily is already such a loveable character, she kind of reminds me of my best friend actually, and I think Timmy is simply adorable. I can't wait to read more, I'm so intrigued on how this is going to play out.

I am excited for this story already and can not wait to see what you have in store :)!

This will be the first ever femmeslash that I will read and I'm sure that I will love it <3

Okay so I realize you haven't even posted the first chapter yet but I love your other story and I saw the link and I literally spazzed because I have yet to find a good lesbian romance on this site that's not filled with sex and all that shit ^.^ and judging by your other story I'm pretty sure this one will be amazing.