I like it. There's a few grammatical errors, but that's fine we all have them. It happens. The chapters are fairly short, but you seem to update fast so I guess that doesn't matter entirely. I really like how this is a true story, it intrigues me and at the same time shocks me. I'm sorry you had to go through that and I pray that you're out of it. It's a good story and I encourage you to keep writing. Writing has always been a way for me to vent out my hidden emotions and secrets. It's a way for me to calm down, so I strongly encourage you to keep writing this story. It's good so far plus it'll help you out emotionally. =)
November 26th, 2012 at 11:13pm