History Books and the Man That Time Forgot - Comments

  • Teenage Dirtbag.

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    (I just realised that the first part of my comment could be misconstrued. By 'awful', I meant 'heartrending and emotional', not 'bad'. :p)
    December 4th, 2012 at 04:46pm
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    (I just realised that the first part of my comment could be misconstrued. By 'awful', I meant 'heartrending and emotional', not 'bad'. :p)
    December 4th, 2012 at 04:46pm
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    That was... wonderful and awful at the same time. It was so beautifully written and had me hooked until the very end. I'm glad it focused more on Donghae and his emotions than the girl. So many authors do that thing where they pair idols with OCs (who almost always seem to be author surrogates) and just go on and on about their relationship until I can't read on. Admittedly, I almost thought this was going to be one of those fics when I started reading, but I decided to push on and read it to the end, and I'm so glad I did. This really is a beautiful, heartbreaking piece.
    December 4th, 2012 at 04:45pm
  • River Young;

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    This. This was amazing. I seriously teared up. The pain that was felt through your words was just so real. I loved this even though the ending was so painful. :(
    December 2nd, 2012 at 01:52am
  • honeyjoons

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    Oh my gosh. That was heartbreaking. Not even going to lie, that made me tear up a little. The whole thing by itself was beautiful and wonderfully written. You're amazing at writing and conveying emotion which is what had me so absorbed and able to completely comprehend and feel Donghae's pain. While the ending was sad and hurt my heart, I think it was actually the right way to end this. This was just lovely all in all. Completely lovely.
    November 29th, 2012 at 11:52pm