I love how this story just showed one moment of the relationship - the ending. I could still tell basically what happened (he'd cheated on her multiple times) but I didn't know the details of te relationship though like how long they'd been going out, etc. I don't think those were neccessary for this story though. They would have just added bulkiness that wasn't needed (if that makes sense). I also love how Audrey knows she's doing the right thing and what's best but she still wants him to come back. It showed that often times the right thing is the hardest thing to do.
Good job and thanks for entering!