Revelations - Comments

@ violetshade
Ahhh so more "inspired by" rather than an actual sequel, gotcha.

I rec a lot of a my friends works, as to reading, I'm very picky and need to be in the right mood/mind-set to read fanfic, if that makes sense? But I'll have a look at your list, see if anything tickles my fancy :D

I'm writing a story on their fanfic site that will eventually mae it on here called "Shepherd of Fire" where Matt's the Devil. It was mostly inspired by the music video, but I definitely had a lot of this story in my head once I came up with it. Gates is a demon, too, though.

I see you read lots of people's stuff--I'd love for you to read some of my stuff and let me know what you think!!

@ violetshade
I'm really glad to hear you like this, and it matters not when you get into something, just that you enjoy it :D

I'm still around, not often but I am. I don't know how a sequel would work being written by someone else, and you're likely to get pulled up by mods for it, but the art would be perfectly fine - actually intriguing to see how you envision him.

Thank you for reading, and for taking the time to comment.

I know this was posted years ago, but I'm just now getting into this stuff.
There are so many awesome things about this! The imagery is so vivid and the good and evil stuff is so beautifully tragic.
I've reread this a few times and it's just so goddamn good every time.
At some point I'm probably going to write a sequel to this just for me-unless you get re-interested and want to-and if you are still around on this site, let me know and I could send it to you!
Also, thinking about a drawing inspired by this-probably just Matt, maybe both of them...

wow this was really good, I really liked this i love how it was written

@ xXxMCRsavedmexXx
Thank you so much for your continued support, your comments always make me smile and feel better about my writing :D
I'm currently working on two more Bratt one-shots, both for comps, so they'll be out soon hopefully. Then it's onto working out my full lengths, which I hope are going to be good
Thank you for reading, commenting and for always having such inspiring words :D

Wow... Just wow... I'm not even sure what to say. I want to know how your brain is wired.... Or, can I just borrow it, for a little while? Maybe clone and study it? I'd love to be able to think of and write such fascinating things. I hope you plan on doing something with this sheer talent you have with words, I'm sure you could go so much further with it.
Again, another truly amazing and captivating read... Can it get any better? I'm not sure it's possible but you'll try.
You're keeping Bratt alive! There is barely anyone who writes Bratt stories - or at least fantastic ones like this! Makes mine seem like its being written by a little kid. XD
Keep up the brilliant and creative [takes out a lot of words cuz you'd be here forever reading them all] Bratt writing! You really are amazing! And I adore reading everything you write!

When it said "Oh how the mighty fall." I thought of Fall Out Boy. ^_^

Don't you know what your writing does to me? I love this.
It's always like I'm right there in the mix with a bag of popcorn cheering on whoever I want. You're a true talent bub.

Thank God I chose to read this now rather than before school, I don't know if I would have managed all of this amazingness in four minutes!

OK, it took me a moment to work out what was going on because I have no right mindset and it was so good that I couldn't even begin to comprehend what was going on, but that's OK, because now I understand! Dammit woman, why is your description so good??? You confuse me in the best way possible!

I love the dialogue in this, it has to be my favourite part of it all. Just...it flows so amazingly well, and their conversation seems so easy and natural- it's so damn hard for people to do that just right (I should know) and you just capture it so beautifully. The constant change of fear and strength between them both at different times is just so well provoked and thought out, it's so nice to see in a story. You genuinely feel like you could hear those characters saying those particular words.

Wow. That's one way to lose a battle I suppose. And to be honest, if Matt was the devil, I don't think I'd feel bad about it! But I love how contained Brian is before he finally gives in, as though those angel wings are nothing more than something he's stuck on his back to kid himself that he's an angel.

MENTION OF M-PREG. RED ALERT WE HAVE A MENTION OF POTENTIAL M-PREG, YES FUCKING PLEASE. Dude, if it takes me to write another chapter for Honey, please say you will write an m-preg sequel to this. I WILL WRITE MORE BRATT I PROMISE.

This was incredible hun, you never fail to amaze me with your writing- you get better and better every single time.

I... what... You... This. FUCK.
Like, this wasn't what I expected at all! Holy shit, I'm still in shock from how it all went down. Your descriptions were so vivid and just holy hell. I could see EVERYTHING. Oh my god, the way that you described them both.

Brian and his holiness, his perfection and godlike features, then you have rugged, evil, demonic Matt? Holy fuck, I didn't expect them to actually have sex... I thought someone was gonna die. But, like... I love how Matt forced Brian into falling, then in result, impregnating Brian. Oohh. MORE. MORE. MORE. You left it wide open for another damn chapter. Fuck.

@ Synful Shadows
Thanks for telling me, I completely missed that I completely missed the commas and such too. I edit is until it's exemplary and every single time I upload, mibba fucks it up and deletes the edit. It's done it on so many of my things! But thanks, I'll have to look into it

Dude! This is fucking amazing! *Sing song voice because it's called for. XD*

Even if I already knew what the basic gist of the story was, I still wasn't expecting that. The details in this are fucking crazy. I love how you described them. It just made it more intense, good and evil personified in the flesh. In my head, it makes their appearances so different even though they look like they do in real life. I'm not sure if that makes sense or not. But even their actions and words just kind of make the good and evil even more prominent. It's just the perfect portrayal of both.

And Brian being forced/swayed into falling was great. If you're going to fall, you might as well have your grace taken by being fucked like that. I've got to say that was a twist. XD And I actually didn't see the sex playing out the way beforehand. And I loved how afterwards, Brian refuses to let Matt think that Matt was the only reason he decided to say yes. I kind of laughed. And then the mention of a future m-preg! Ugh, that's enough to make me want more to this. I really want to see that played out haha. Plus I just want m-preg.

So yeah, this was amazing, and I love the shit out of it. :D On a different note, I think going back to edit wouldn't hurt. There's a few mistakes, some missing commas and apostrophes. And then there's the hard plain of his chest. The plain needs to be switched to plane, but there's not much that needs to be fixed.

@ Brian Haner Jr
Need moarrrr maybe like a sequel? :D you don't have to obviously but like, god! I want more haha

@ RachTheBat
But, but it was a one-shot

Very much worth the wait :D There's gonna be more right? I want moreee! XD

Now that's how the apocalypse should have gone down! I'm kinda speechless haha, that was so good! Brian made the perfect angel, all full of grace and holier than thou, that is until demon Matt had his wicked way with him of course XD

Prince of hell? There has to be more! Haha. I liked the banter between them, the little war of words before Matt had enough and beat the shit out of Brian. I did feel bad for the angel at first, the good being drawn out of him the further Matt got, his grace bursting out of him but let's be fair, he loved it

How you describe the world at the beginning is just amazing, so dark and evil, you painted the perfect picture, I could see it all so clearly. God, I love your writing, it's so fucking good!

I've got so much more I want to say but my phone is starting to scream at me so I'll stop now haha. Please write more of this though? I'll give you all the chocolate in the world! LOL