A Veil of Black and Gold - Comments

@nothingisasitseems thanks for sticking up for my story, i love it alot n i was scared to death she was going to report it:) thanks for reading:)

@ TARDISblue
Th grammar is only a little bit off, and what did you say they could be reported for? Not spacing paragraphs properly? Haha, wow. I agree people need to hear constructive criticism, but only if it's helpful. If you don't like the way it's written, simply don't read it, there's no need to be rude. You spelt 'lose' wrong, by the way, seeing as we're pointing out flaws. :)

This is great! :D

@ TARDISblue
Ok it's all good, I understand all that if yu check out my latest chapter I took the layout off and spaced the paragraphs better I don't read my stories through before posting them n that's my bad I'm going to start working on that n also I dnt agree about the spoiler thing I have read a few successful stories on here and they do the same thing with the description of the chapters I appreciate yu pointing out my flaws and my story will be a lot better thanks to that

@ coolguy69

Then you don't know the rules of the site and making stories. This story needs a proper Beta Reader before being posted.

Why would someone report it just because the layout makes it hard to read, or because the paragraphs aren't indented? I think this story is just fine the way it is, if I couldn't read the layout to a story, I would just put it on default layout and continue reading. I understand the paragraph not indenting could make it difficult to read, but that's still no reason to report. If you don't like a story, simply don't read it... no need to report. gosh people these days! lol XB mm got yo back nik

(Comment Swap)

So first things first, flaws. The layout is very difficult to read, you should change it or make it so the writing isn't so bright. Your grammar is terrible, along with the fact there is no SPACING in your paragraphs WHATSOEVER. This needs to be sorted immediately because otherwise you can be reported for this. Don't continuously ask for comments, this will loose you readers and subscribers, along with the fact you are putting spoilers on the chapters before anyone reads it. I wanted to read this but I'm afraid I won't because of this, I may also have to report it.

Hey Hey comment swap time!
i do love zombie stuff so this automatically wins it has humor in it too which i love, though with the layout and all it's a little hard to read.....well actually just impossible i had to switch to default layout.

But that has nothing to do with the goodness of this story, so if you want to keep the layout then do it!

Great story so far