The Jerk Theory - Comments

They need to just like.... meet eachother halfway and tell eachother the absolute truth! Like "I'm jealous of him" "I'm jealous of those girls" "let's be together and not be jealous" like they r too cute for eachother! Something needs to happen haha! Update soon <3 xxxxx

Liam and Holly are tooooo cute!! :)

I love this story and the prequel that I read right before this. It is all so amazing and I can not wait for an update because I'm so excited to find out what happens between Holly and Liam, make it happen soon please!!

for me i get marj is trying to help but she's got no right to be angry. it really is all her fault. and she's making liam look like the bad guy. liam is just hurt. she needs to understand that things take time she shouldnt but into other peoples business cause shes uncomfortable. seriously ughh idk why but i don't like her. :/

for me i get marj is trying to help but she's got no right to be angry. it really is all her fault. and she's making liam look like the bad guy. liam is just hurt. she needs to understand that things take time she shouldnt but into other peoples business cause shes uncomfortable. seriously ughh idk why but i don't like her. :/

Aww. They're cute! LIAM should just declare his love for her already.

great update!:)

Liam, you are so in love and you don't even know it.

I just want Liam to get over her so Holly can say "finally!" And give him a big smooch!
Update soon!

Whoaaaa. I get that they're worried and stuff but let them be Liam and Holly beeee. They're cute!

I just wanna shove Liam and Holly together while chanting the word 'Kiss'. *smiles sweetly*

alright liam - stop being a little bitch and get over marjorie already! you didn't get the girl in that story. and holly doesn't need to be a bitch to marjorie either. not happy with any of them at the moment. feels like they want to punish niall for being happy with someone.

Amazing chapter, can't wait to read the next one :)

I love this story so much oh my god you have no idea<3 please update soon!!!

I saw Ed on Tuesday! He's just perfect. Loving the story so far! Can't wait to see what's going to happen next! : )

Can't wait for the trio to get into trouble! Wooooo!

I swear I had two oportunities to see Ed Sheern Live (he had 2 concerts in Seattle for cheap-ish and I only live 4 hr drive but they were sold out so I missed out :C so I'm so glad to hear how other ppl know how amazing he is!) Haha
Now onto how great your story is progressing! I kinda want Holly to mke Marj a bit jealous... I love her and Niall but I also want her a bit jello haha maybe that's just the catty girl in me haha ;D but I love this story (and the last one too) but its too great!! Become inspired and update soon please ::D xoxo <3

I swear I had two oportunities to see Ed Sheern Live (he had 2 concerts in Seattle for cheap-ish and I only live 4 hr drive but they were sold out so I missed out :C so I'm so glad to hear how other ppl know how amazing he is!) Haha
Now onto how great your story is progressing! I kinda want Holly to mke Marj a bit jealous... I love her and Niall but I also want her a bit jello haha maybe that's just the catty girl in me haha ;D but I love this story (and the last one too) but its too great!! Become inspired and update soon please ::D xoxo <3

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I think just the way you are portraying Harry he can purposely cause problems just so Liam realizes his actual feelings and all but I think Holam (Liam and Holly just cause "Lially" didn't seeem right lol) seem to cute for eachother and I can't wait for a progression! the Liam 1st person was good, simple but funny! I absolutely love this story <3 update soon xx :D