May 31st, 2013 at 08:02pm
So much talent! I love this!
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A Nip of Frost - Comments
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April 10th, 2013 at 03:57am
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Ow wow :D This was great, and you're great at writing poetry :) You're very talented, and I'm now off to read more of your works!March 25th, 2013 at 02:18am
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This is just far too cute. I love the poem in the summary, and the little one at the end of the story. Just -sigh- even how he just kissed her nose and floated off. I don't know what to say, you did such a lovely job with the flow of the words, and how you used the word assigned to you in this piece, I even forgot that I was supposed to be looking out for it. Wish there was more, but this was just so amazing.March 23rd, 2013 at 03:37pm
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Oh and poem was amazing
March 19th, 2013 at 02:37am -
This was so adorable and heart warming (although it revolves around winter
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It's the first time I read a Jack Frost fanfiction and I honestly don't know much about him, but your story made me want to do some research. I especially love the middle section where we find out how Jack and Alaska met, it's rather sweet. This story has a very innocent and pure vibe to it, like a childish love story. It's just lovely
March 19th, 2013 at 02:36am -
Great work. Can I ask a question, though? Is this story continuing? I sure hope it does... Because it's one of the best fanfics I've read.March 10th, 2013 at 07:10am
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asdfghjkl this is amazing!
and adida, i apologize for not writing a better comment but i just woke up after having a huge schoolwide field trip yesterday so i'm sick and tired--literally!
but can i just say that i adore jack and alaska, and this is the best jack frost fanfic i have read? 
February 23rd, 2013 at 06:07pm -
By far the BEST Jack Frost fiction that I have EVER had the privilege to read! I freaking adored the hell out of this!
The summary was amazing. I just loved the poem so much. And as I've already told you, the banner is freaking awesome! I thought that this was very original and that the plot and the way you wrote it was perfect. Honestly, this was amazing. I have to admit, when I read "And then it happened", I was like having a mini panic attack because I was like, "WHAT happened?!" XD
I loved how Alaska went to the lake after Jack was bullied, and I thought it was sweet how she comforted him and that they were together hugging. My heart was melting. <33
And that kiss on the nose...! *swoon*
This was amazing and I cannot wait to advertise it in the blog I'll be writing! :)February 20th, 2013 at 08:48am -
First of all, let me clear about this. I THINK THAT JACK FROST IS FUCKING FANTASTIC AND I LOVE HOW INSANELY HANDSOME HE IS EVEN THOUGH HE'S A CARTOON CHARACTER BUT DEAR GOD JUST LOVE ME, OKAY?
Right. Now that I've gotten that out of the way, let me start.
Layout&banner: I love the simplicity of this. It's beautiful, the colours are clear enough where they blend effortlessly, and yet remind me of the cold of winter.
Summary: I like that. It sets out the tone of the overall story like a fairy tale of some sort or I don't know. Something with a magical feel to it, definitely.
Chapter One: Oh wow. Oh wow. Now when you ended that first bit with And then it happened. I literally stopped breathing. What could've possible happened? See I've just recently watched the Legend of the Guardians so I was immediately thinking of the Boogeyman, and the nightmare and Mr. Sandman.
The bit about Alaska is interesting. I wonder how it'll tie in with the rest of the story but it's an interesting input. However, I do feel a little iffy about this line:
"Ladies and gentlemen, it is time for our adolescents to gather 'round for our annual Youth Dance," the village spokesperson announced.
The use of the word "adolescents" makes me think of textbooks and diagrams and seems kind of off when you leave it here, especially when we know that it isn't a word that's normally used in everyday lingo.
And it feels kind of odd that she immediately recognizes him too. I mean, she get's it right on first guess. It would've been nice to see her floundering around a bit, trying to figure out who he was. This is just a personal preference thing though so don't feel as if you need to change that or anything.
And awwh, he kisses her. So sweet. I love how you played out the first chapter, how it's all so sweet, and flowery and cute - even that sad part with Alaska and Jack. I'm not sure where this is going though, to be honest, but I'm interested.
Great work!February 5th, 2013 at 01:35am -
You have no idea how excited I was when I found this out! Gah, I don't know what to feel...the human part reminded me a lot of Hiccup from HTTYD (I don't even know...) But ughh, can I just be herr??? This was sooo good.February 3rd, 2013 at 03:07am
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this is gorgeous and my Jack Frost feels are through the roof and omg we need to start our co-write.. but we need to find someone to replace Turtlesbitch...February 1st, 2013 at 01:09pm
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Please update! I love the poem and currently obsessed with Rise of the Guardians. *insert fangirling squeals*December 15th, 2012 at 08:45pm
Layout: 10/10 IT IS SO BEAUTIFUL.
Title: 10/10 Very creative
Word Usage: You actually had two words, and they were perfect in this story.
Overall: 10/10
Comments: I know I had already commented before, but now I need to comment from the contest perspective. As I stated before I love the poem in the summary. This story was so very beautiful and lovely, I still haven't read anything Jack Frost related that could even hold a candle to this.