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Yeah, I've tried not to bring much into it outside of Paul and the rest of the band, but it's going to start getting interesting ;) I like the reunion idea, might have to etch that in somewhere. Thanks for the comments! :)

ahhhhhh!!!!!! just finished reading the whole thing! you need to update this story please!!!! have her go back in time but ayb like a later year, but not too late because he would be with Linda,,,or you could have her try to get back in time but its not working, so you could have the present day 2012 Paul contact her and reconize her as his Rita and they could have a cute little reunion (= <3

im just through chapter 2, i love it so far (= I'm going to read the rest of it right now, but I just wanted to comment on the name choices so far. Stan, for Stan from Liverpool who went to the Art College with John, and they were very close friends. His gf Astrid introduced the Beatles to their famous moptop hairstyles. Maureen, Ringo's 1st wife (= Cydndie, John's 1st wife whom he also met at the Art College (=

Thankyou @EPKent, it's my favourite Beatles song. Always had been. Such interesting lyrics to the song and I thought I'd like to create a character :)

I like your title.

Thankyou so much, that's lovely to hear! I wasn't expecting much, I'm not a particularly strong wirter but I loved this idea. Oooh, shall do! :)

this is so good!!!! please update soon! please read "My heart will go on" im not far into writing it so it should take long to read