Just read through all the chapters and this is such a beautiful story. I love all aspects of it, like the family being so so cute, tom and michele are adorable, and hearing about her past is interesting as well. It's so beautifully written, their love for each other is so obvious and contagious. I really love it, I can't wait to read more!! Please update again soon :)
Ok I got through all the chapters. WOW this story is intriguing and captivated me from the get go I can't even handle this. They are too cute the family dynamic is cute your writing and description is amazing. I. Can't. Wait. For. More.
The jump between chapter eight (her wanting to tell him & nothing happening because he's going to see Margaret) and nine (her getting picked up from work/going out with him) confused the shit out of me. Did I miss a forgiveness scene somewhere? Otherwise, it's been great & I'm looking forward to more!
Oh, I feel so bad for the both of them. Hiddles wants the love of his life. She wants her sanity and security back. I'm hoping she has the courage to tell him her problems soon. Your writing is so lovely, and I'm ecstatic they've at least established that they fancy each other.
You have written a fabulous story so far and I absolutely cannot wait for more. I am so curious as to what's made her shut out the world... I love Tom and Michele!
It's amazing the 'power' Tom has over the family. Everyone seems lighter, happier, most united. It's wonderful to read, really. And hm.. New Year's can be very promising eheh
They are made for each other. I love that you aren't rushing their relationship for the sake of them being in a relationship. No one who is struggling with any real demons is just going to jump into something they aren't ready for and I'm glad that you are portraying that. I can't wait to read some more.
Oh my Goodness... I just want to know what happened to her. I have a few theories but I want to know. It's so frustrating over all. Tom is a great person and he loves her, he wants to help but he doesn't know how.