First off, I really like the simple layoyt. I tend to take a liking to those. The gif in the banner also made me squeal a little because oh my god could they be any cuter. Also, Jongkey is one of my otps which made reading this that much more exciting.
Right off the bat Key was his sassy self which I loved. His and Jonghyun's banter was great, even when they didn't really know one another. I really enjoy things like this where the reader can kind of slowly watch inside of the characters fall/develop a thing for another character and I thought the way you wrote it was wonderful. The story had the perfect amount of humor, detail and cuteness and I loved it.
Oh, one thing I noticed. You wrote "Jonghyun and Taemin fought that night." It made me giggle because Jongtae happened in my mind but I figured it was a typo so I let you know, haha.
Right off the bat Key was his sassy self which I loved. His and Jonghyun's banter was great, even when they didn't really know one another. I really enjoy things like this where the reader can kind of slowly watch inside of the characters fall/develop a thing for another character and I thought the way you wrote it was wonderful. The story had the perfect amount of humor, detail and cuteness and I loved it.
Oh, one thing I noticed. You wrote "Jonghyun and Taemin fought that night." It made me giggle because Jongtae happened in my mind but I figured it was a typo so I let you know, haha.