If That Ain't Love... - Comments

  • leecasper17

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    This was awesome! Pretty much every Tyler Seguin story shows him as some party-boy man-whore, but I liked how this was different. I mean, in the flashbacks, he was still kind of man-whorish, but the present-day part of the story was a fresh perspective difference from the usual Seguin fan fics. I like how you included Cassidy (she's such a cutie), and I laughed a lot when Ashley said Tyler looked like a homeless man who just hit puberty. Overall, it was cute, happy, and had just the right balance of drama and realism. Great job!

    I'm slowly getting to the story comments - sorry it's taking so long! (School has been very busy lately.) But I'm working on reading your stories and writing your one-shot!
    January 28th, 2013 at 03:06am
  • ChristineLRM

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    @ Marinesister92
    Thank you! and thank you for the typo point out. :) Of course now that it is over I am thinking of 100 scenarious to put them in and I'm all "I CANT UPDATE IT." Once the contest is officially over I think I'll go back and build on this. I had fun with this one. Thank you for the wonderful comments as always - can't wait to read your Carter one!!!!
    December 19th, 2012 at 07:15pm
  • Marinesister92

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    oh my gosh. i didn't think i could stand him breaking her heart anymore than he had with that dumb blonde in his lap in the bar. I love that the story kept going back and forth between the plane ride and back to the past then the present again it was great.
    I don't know if you know this but but one of your Ashley's turned out to be aly during the big moment. Just thought i'd let you know.
    Love it!
    -S
    December 19th, 2012 at 06:55pm
  • Renee Says;

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    This was too cute, I loved it!
    Reading Lock-Out stories make me sob too D:
    Good luck darling!
    December 18th, 2012 at 04:48pm