I'm just gonna start of by saying that this is going to be one long ass comment.
I had completely forgotten about everything that happened in this story so I had to go back and re-read it.
I have to say that you ladies never cease to amaze me with each and every update you make.
I don't think I have ever enjoyed re-reading a story as much as I do this one and all of your cowrites. How talented you ladies are just blows me away, and makes me speechless.
Now on to my comment about the chapter.
I'm glad they found Jack, even if he did hurt Jacky. I enjoyed the fact that Josh actually did something instead of just saying that he was going to. The fact that Kuza is teaming up with Oli really pisses me off. I would love to just rip both of their throats out, but I won't because I want to see what you ladies will come up with next. XD
I was really proud of Jacky and how well his recovery is going. I'm still proud of Jacky. I'm ready to stomp Chris's ass into a tiny little puddle for trying to force Jacky into letting Josh feed off of him when he KNEW Jacky was no where near ready for that. I'm thankful that Jack was there to help him calm down though.
The ending of this was a great way to end a tension-filled chapter. Having the guys fuck around like that was funny as hell, because I could picture everything in my head.
Anywhore, I'm gonna stop rambling now. I LOVE YOU GUYS!!!
P.S. Please don't stop writing. I understand the need for taking a break, but please you ladies are way too talented to stop completely.
*hurt in his eyes. (Sorry, my computer glitched) But I'm happy with the updates that I had to catch up on. I love you both and you are both so fucking talented. I'm not even joking. I'm a tad bit jealous. xD But oh well.
*hurt in his eyes. (Sorry, my computer glitched) But I'm happy with the updates that I had to catch up on. I love you both and you are both so fucking talented. I'm not even joking. I'm a tad bit jealous. xD But oh well.
*hurt in his eyes. (Sorry, my computer glitched) But I'm happy with the updates that I had to catch up on. I love you both and you are both so fucking talented. I'm not even joking. I'm a tad bit jealous. xD But oh well.
I loved this update so much!! I'm so freaking proud of Jacky right now. He has come a long way from not letting Josh have his fangs near him to asking Josh to let him feel them. I really wanna know why Ryan was so upset when he had been sent into the house and why Dev had hur
I loved this update so much!! I'm so freaking proud of Jacky right now. He has come a long way from not letting Josh have his fangs near him to asking Josh to let him feel them. I really wanna know why Ryan was so upset when he had been sent into the house and why Dev had hur
@ JaxGreen Okay.. I am not even ashamed to say that I fangirled a bit when I seen that you replied to me. :D
I can't wait to see Devin's abilities in action. I would also like to see Chris's power too. Preferably not on one of the FIR boys or Max.
I'm positive anything you ladies write will be amazing and I will love it and probably hate part of it at the same time :D But secretly I enjoy it when I end up loving and hating the same update. I think it keeps it interesting. xD
Anywhore, I'm gonna shut up and go read some more fanfics. :D I LOVE YOU BOTH!!!!!!!!
@ JaxGreen Okay.. I am not even ashamed to say that I fangirled a bit when I seen that you replied to me. :D
I can't wait to see Devin's abilities in action. I would also like to see Chris's power too. Preferably not on one of the FIR boys or Max.
I'm positive anything you ladies write will be amazing and I will love it and probably hate part of it at the same time :D But secretly I enjoy it when I end up loving and hating the same update. I think it keeps it interesting. xD
Anywhore, I'm gonna shut up and go read some more fanfics. :D I LOVE YOU BOTH!!!!!!!!
@ foREVer-a-creature Thank you so so very much for your comment. I have to say I was having quite the crud-filled day until I feasted my eyes upon this comment. I was very tempted in having Devin use his abilities but I can assure you that you're probably going to see it in the upcoming chapters. I'll definitely be trying to do my constant updates so don't you worry about a thing m'friend. You shall see an update soon. My coauthor and I shall put our heads together and come up with something absolutely amazing for you to view. Thank you again for your comment dear it has totally made this day a little brighter.
Holy fucking shit!! I can't believe I missed that you ladies have updated since the last time I commented. I've missed this story so much that I may have cried a little when I seen you guys updated.
The fact that Alex formally apologised to Jacks and Josh was a huge shock to me. I didn't expect him to even apologise at all. And I don't know if it was just me, but I was so full of hope at the chance to see Dev use his powers, but NOOOO you just had to not let that happen. xD I still love you though.
I do think that Jacks is making the right choice by letting Josh choose Alex's punishment for what happened. I don't think that Jacky is in the right state of mind at the current moment to make decisions like that.
Anywhore, lovely updates as always. I hope you ladies don't have anymore cases of writers block after this. :D XD I love you both!
Girls, you have done one hell of a job on this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. The fluff at the end though! Just ugg. I love it so much. I can't even express how much I love this story. <3 If I could, I would jump into this story and rip Oliver to shreds. Gahh! I hate him so much right now.