I agree with Kainder. I believe this was beautiful and delicate, just like the victim before her uncle took advantage of her. It remembers her as a sad and fragile girl and then when you mix "Sometimes I wish I was dead," it just works amazing. It gave me complete chills. Ernest Hemmingway once said that he could write a great story in just six words. He wrote "For Sale: Baby shoes, never worn." It broke thousands of hearts, but he did it. I'm afraid you've lived up to it. You wrote a great novel in one chapter. Congrats.
July 18th, 2014 at 06:27am