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  • lady_enygma

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    well that ending was certainly a shock, good job!
    October 1st, 2013 at 02:31pm
  • OctoberA7X

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    The ending definitely threw me....awesome :)
    May 9th, 2013 at 04:28am
  • Emily_Haner

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    loved it
    May 9th, 2013 at 02:44am
  • aaron hotchner

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    This was so good! I absoutley loved this. You have some good writing styles. Great job and good luck!
    April 16th, 2013 at 09:51pm
  • HanerJoy

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    O.O OMG I didn't see that one coming O.O I loved it :D
    March 30th, 2013 at 12:48am
  • HanerJoy

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    O.O OMG I didn't see that one coming O.O I loved it :D
    March 29th, 2013 at 11:49pm
  • Rath

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    Wow. That was quite an end lol but I loved it! So unexpected! I loved it so much. :D
    March 29th, 2013 at 03:56am
  • CountSynula

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    Awww so sad! It was an awesome chapter though. Poor Kira and especially poor Jimmy. It's a real shame that they couldn't be together lol. She should have listened to Jimmy and waited to sneak out with him. Good ending though! It worked out really well.
    March 29th, 2013 at 03:21am
  • CountSynula

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    That was super long and I loved it! Haha I wasn't expecting Brian to fuck her in the ass lol and poor Jimmy lol....he's gonna be in trouble now LOLOLOL. Anyway, as always I loved the update! I'm proud that it was so long and made me randy haha lol. Smile
    March 23rd, 2013 at 04:36am
  • Rath

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    Oh my God..............that was.............excuse me while I go take care of myself? Lol.
    That was so freaking hot. I loved it!
    I'm so jealous of her. I would love to be in her position.
    Please hurry and put up the next chapter?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
    :D
    March 22nd, 2013 at 06:26am
  • HanerJoy

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    Oh my good God O.O I envy that girl so much O.O Poor Jimmy I hope he doesn't hurt him :( I can't wait for more :D
    March 20th, 2013 at 04:31pm
  • heretic.

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    Dear lord that was hot!! She's a lucky girl :P
    March 20th, 2013 at 04:28pm
  • Rath

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    Oh. My. God. I think I just...nevermind. That was amazing. It got me horny and I am so jealous of her that she got to have both Matt and Brian. I wish that I was in her position. I would be the happiest person alive if I did. I think that you should make this into a full story. I would read it. :) It was amazing and I'm glad that I read it. Thank you for entering the contest and good luck.
    March 16th, 2013 at 05:44am
  • HanerJoy

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    wow this was amazingly hot :P It would be great if you make it a full story :D I can't wait for more :D
    March 11th, 2013 at 05:28pm
  • synful_desires

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    She's such a lucky bitch, I hate her! LOL I'd be more than happy if you make this a full story! ;) I didn't find any errors in your story, you only forgot to write this sentence in the third person: "My body ached for release but I struggled with all my might to hold it back. Sweat formed on her brow from her effort and she knew she couldn’t hold it for much longer." But I understand you, I'd put myself in the story if it was me writing it! Ha-ha Can't wait for the next update!!!!!
    March 10th, 2013 at 06:04pm
  • CountSynula

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    Wooo hooo that was sooo naughty lol. Hehe they fucked her real good too but I have a feeling that this is only the beginning hehe hehe. Great job woman! I'm addicted to your writing and can't wait for more of this!
    March 9th, 2013 at 04:26pm
  • Yours Synfully

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    This is amazing. It so hot an graphic. Perfect! I can't wait to read the other two parts even though this would make a fabulous full length. God! It's so good! You have to update this soon!
    March 8th, 2013 at 06:26pm
  • calousedheart

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    holy shizzballs i love it girl!!!!!!!!!!! cant wait for the other chapters. the whole public sex act thing was insanely hot!!!
    March 8th, 2013 at 07:26am
  • Angelina Shadows

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    @ synful_desires
    Its not a waste of time Lol I love talking to you and I'm at school right now
    February 27th, 2013 at 09:24pm
  • synful_desires

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    @ Angelina Shadows
    That I am!!! LOL Don't waste your time talking to me GO WRITE!!!! Hahaahahahah
    February 27th, 2013 at 09:23pm