Awww so sad! It was an awesome chapter though. Poor Kira and especially poor Jimmy. It's a real shame that they couldn't be together lol. She should have listened to Jimmy and waited to sneak out with him. Good ending though! It worked out really well.
That was super long and I loved it! Haha I wasn't expecting Brian to fuck her in the ass lol and poor Jimmy lol....he's gonna be in trouble now LOLOLOL. Anyway, as always I loved the update! I'm proud that it was so long and made me randy haha lol.
Oh my God..............that was.............excuse me while I go take care of myself? Lol. That was so freaking hot. I loved it! I'm so jealous of her. I would love to be in her position. Please hurry and put up the next chapter?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! :D
Oh. My. God. I think I just...nevermind. That was amazing. It got me horny and I am so jealous of her that she got to have both Matt and Brian. I wish that I was in her position. I would be the happiest person alive if I did. I think that you should make this into a full story. I would read it. :) It was amazing and I'm glad that I read it. Thank you for entering the contest and good luck.
She's such a lucky bitch, I hate her! LOL I'd be more than happy if you make this a full story! ;) I didn't find any errors in your story, you only forgot to write this sentence in the third person: "My body ached for release but I struggled with all my might to hold it back. Sweat formed on her brow from her effort and she knew she couldn’t hold it for much longer." But I understand you, I'd put myself in the story if it was me writing it! Ha-ha Can't wait for the next update!!!!!
Wooo hooo that was sooo naughty lol. Hehe they fucked her real good too but I have a feeling that this is only the beginning hehe hehe. Great job woman! I'm addicted to your writing and can't wait for more of this!
This is amazing. It so hot an graphic. Perfect! I can't wait to read the other two parts even though this would make a fabulous full length. God! It's so good! You have to update this soon!