UC Berkeley "college" dictionary - Comments

I guess I should start off by saying that I'm from comment swap. I was not expecting this, especially by first glance at the title. But, I have to say I was surprised when I read it. This is very different from the other stories posted. I like how the definitions lead to a part of the story and how they have something to do with it. I absolutely love how much detail you put into it, because not having enough detail is one of my pet peeves. This was refreshing to read because you're a good writer and your story is like a lot of the stories posted but it was executed in a different way. This was a unique way to write a story.

Keep up the good writing.

At first glance at the title, I was a little turned off but then I began to read and just WOW! I don't think I have ever seen this way of writing done before! I love how each word entry soon begins to build off the last one and I love how each definition with the verb usage example is a part from the story and not just some plain dictionary entry. one thing I did notice is that under the Balcony entry there seems to be no periods until the end. I recommend adding them to make it flow better. Also you need to watch run on sentences. But other than that you have a nice piece on your hand.

Hello there. Xd I was brought here from comment swap. To tell you the truth this isn't something I would pick to read but it is well written and it seems you have done your research, so pretty good job. Well done. Xd Keep on writing and share your writings with everyone on mibbaland. That's all, bye. Xd

Hello there. Xd I was brought here from comment swap. To tell you the truth this isn't something I would pick to read but it is well written and it seems you have done your research, so pretty good job. Well done. Xd Keep on writing and share your writings with everyone on mibbaland. That's all, bye. Xd