This is really good! I can't believe you're not going to write much more. This sounds like a start of a really good (and grammatically correct) novel, and I'd read all of it. There's loads of potential and I really like how you captured Max's thoughts as if you were him. In your description, you say that "he has to make a choice". I'd love to see that develop more. Especially since "all the hot guys are straight". It's funny 'cause I've heard a lot of girls say that all the hot guys are gay. This is amazing and I'd love to read more. Keep writing!
December 28th, 2012 at 03:00am