As Free as a Caged Bird - Comments

this was really good and like i felt so bad for her and brian and i cant wait to read the sequel now

This story is really good. You are a terrific writer; the descriptions and emotions are completely marvelous and you got my heart jumping and aching throughout the whole piece. I still can't believe that end - too perfect. Syn becoming Brian is one beautiful thing :3
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I really liked this story. It was very well written and the relationship between Becca and Brian was amazing. The chemistry was really good. I really liked it. :)

Good God. You're like some kind of genius, I swear! This was amazing. The history and the emotion and holy crap, I really, really wish there was more of this.

amazing!! just amazing from the start till the end. <3

You did an amazing job with this and I absolutely love it. It was great from the beginning to the end. I believe you ended it perfectly and I am so happy that they are back together.

aawe totally loved this story.. awesome from start to end <3

Oh I loved it! Honestly, I wasn't expecting her to really be kidnapped for that reason. Mostly because people tend to drag it out, and this was intended to only have three chapters. I liked how this worked though, in just one chapter without it coming off as rushed because I hate when things seem rushed. The emotion at the end when he found her was perfect too. And to think the whole mess between them was over a pregnancy scare. This was fantastic. Good luck with your contest. :)

I absolutely loved it! I'm glad he found her. Loved all the emotion at the end of that. It was great. Goodluck with the contest.:)

Oh man, my heart. If it wasn't for that scene where was begging her to say his name, I probably would've been fine. That was just heartbreaking, on both their parts. I don't blame her for not wanting to go back either. That place ha got to be full of bad memories, and she's still having nightmares even though she's on her own. I just want to know what made him push her away like that if he truly does care for her. :/ And now she's being taken away! I kind of think Brian may be behind that or at least one of the guys are if not him specifically. Loved it!

Holy hell that was a great update! so she was a sex slave at their mansion and Syn claimed her as his own and saved her... I like it. It made me sad for both of them when he was begging her to go back with him and trying to get her to say his real name. I think they kind of need each other. I also think that Syn refused to take no for an answer and sent those men to collect her. Update soon please! I need to know how this ends. It's so good

Holy hell that was a great update! so she was add slave at their mansion and Syn claimed her as his own and saved her... I like it. It made me sad for both of them when he was begging her to up back with humans trying to get her to say his real name. I think they kind of need each other. I also think that Syn refused to take no for an answer and sent those men to collect her. Update soon please! I need to know how this ends. It's so good

I really want to know what's happened between the two of them and where all the anger is coming from. It's an awesome start, and I love your writing style. Can't wait to see how this will play out.

Is this a one shot for the contest or is there more? It's so good, but I really want to know more like exactly what went on between them? Great writing though:)

I love this already just by the first chapter. As I was reading I could feel the anger coming from both Brian and Becca. I love your writing style and I am intrigued to find out the whole story behind Becca and Brian's relationship. I can not wait to read the next chapter.