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  • Lady.V.

    Lady.V. (960)

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    I highly rec this drabble to others! *high five*

    The sweeteness of the couple is shown in this drabble through out. You are describing just a moment, a few mere minutes and you've managed to use all the right words to emphasize their relationship and especially the last two lines of the dialogue. Last chance, Issac says but Cypher's confident when he says there's no such thing. Happy ending! c:

    Well done!

    -Maria.
    January 27th, 2016 at 10:14pm
  • laredo.

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    For some reason, this made me a little sad. I don't know what it was, but I felt a little emotional reading this. What was their last chance? That line hit me in the heart. I hate when something is a last chance, and I worried that Isaac or Cypher would miss it.

    Anyway, it was really cute and simple. I absolutely loved the relationship between Cypher (unique name!) and Isaac. It was extremely genuine and you could really feel emotions for them. You almost want all the good things for them to happen. And you did that with a small drabble, so that's incredible.

    The writing was great, I didn't see any errors, and I loved it. Good job. :)
    August 8th, 2013 at 02:09am
  • aubs

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    This was oh my goodness so super cute. The relationship between Cypher and Isaac (I love that name, by the way) is just so adorable. Well, at least it seems adorable judging by this drabble.

    "This is our last chance--" Isaac starts, his voice shaky.
    This line makes me wonder why that moment is their last chance. What is he late for? I was thinking that one of them was late for work, or even late for his flight, and they just wouldn't see each other every again, but the second one seemed more emotional than the first. Which is why I just thought that he was late for work because I want them to be together forever.

    Anyway, I really loved this drabble; it was just so cute!
    June 3rd, 2013 at 12:41am
  • Join the Masquerade

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    I really liked this, because it was so simple and... almost a whisper. I feel that if someone were to read it out aloud, they'd have to read it rather quietly.
    I feel really, really bad that I can't find anything else to say about this D: I liked the dialogue. I liked that it felt real. And secret. I felt like I was hiding behind their mirror, carefully balancing there and just listening as they had their moment.

    I didn't see any errors and your layout didn't make me bleed.
    December 30th, 2012 at 06:32pm
  • kowabunga

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    Simply adorable. ♡
    December 29th, 2012 at 10:57pm
  • Elephant PJs

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    Cute. And original. Oh my god Clap

    The name Cypher still gets me though lmfao
    December 29th, 2012 at 08:36am
  • What...

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    There's no such thing

    IT'S A BOY.... And an original... Cry I'm so proud. Clap
    December 29th, 2012 at 01:15am