I just recently watched Rise of the Guardians and pretty much instantly I was all for Pitch, and then I was more than happy to stroll on up onto the ship and set sail. Black Frost. How have I gone without? I knew it was going to be a long shot to find anything and then I stumbled upon this gem. And not just a one-shot. The thought of a full story is amazing! I'm sad to see no more than the one chapter, but I'm hoping this comment might spark some more inspiration and fuel this new fire.
This story, this first chapter, wow. You set up such a wonderful nightmare. The fact that he fears what he so clearly enjoys, fears what it would mean. nifdhgbiur yes. I love the way you wrote it, the way you've taken what is meant for children and put such a dark, adult spin on it. I LOVE the dark, the spin, the burning need in Jack that he so desperately wants to bury deep. I so hope you keep this going! Please, please, please, don't give up on it. This is wonderfully amazing!!
I just recently watched Rise of the Guardians and pretty much instantly I was all for Pitch, and then I was more than happy to stroll on up onto the ship and set sail. Black Frost. How have I gone without?
I knew it was going to be a long shot to find anything and then I stumbled upon this gem. And not just a one-shot. The thought of a full story is amazing! I'm sad to see no more than the one chapter, but I'm hoping this comment might spark some more inspiration and fuel this new fire.
This story, this first chapter, wow. You set up such a wonderful nightmare. The fact that he fears what he so clearly enjoys, fears what it would mean. nifdhgbiur yes.