The Geto Siblings - Comments

Thanks :) Yeah I'll go in and do that I normally do didn't notice mibba squished it together. I do plan to incorporate them in but they won' have a ton of dealings with the main characters. They'll see them and meet them from time to time and still be involved in the battles but it will be more from their POV

Very nice, I'm interested to see where you go from here. Obviously since you're caught up in the manga I'm sure you're going to implant your characters along with what happens later with the Vandreich and (hopeful) return of Aizen, and make you're own story out of it. Which sounds really cool btw. The only thing I'd suggest is that you space out your dialogue so it doesn't just look like a solid block of text. I'm sure you've done that but mibba squeezes it together after you submit it. It's a pain in the ass but each chapter you post you gotta space it beforehand during editing. Anyways, keep up the good work!