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omfg! Eu me sinto zonza de como essa história foi rápida, pelo amor de Deus.

i love this, i hated that bitch tiffany when i read what she did and I got all sad when I read that jimmy died and brianna seems so adorable. I can't wait for the last chapter will i can but i wanna read it nowww

I absolutely love this story! I did not expect for Tiffany to be the bug in the mansion and she was the reason for Brian and Becca's heart-shattering break-up. Brian nows he has a daughter and I dying to know his reaction and interaction between the three of them. I can not wait for the last chapter. Please update as soon as you possibly can.

Wow! I totally didn't see any of that coming! This update was awesome and ended perfect. I dunno why, but I got a serious tremor of excitement when i read that Brian was piloting that chopper!Sexy sexy! I can't wait for more. I'm excited that they are all back together. Can't wait to see what Brian has to say about everything!

Thank God that whore is finally DEAD! So she was a mole inside the mansion for the FBI? I am so HAPPY that she is dead for good. I know everything is smooth sailing but what Becca do now since she knows now that Tiffany wasn't anything to Syn except for another warm body. Will she forgive Brian and let her be apart of her and her daughter's life. I can't wait for the final chapter!

Well, was not expecting that. Tiffany is a horrible person, ratting out the guys AND pretending to be engaged to Brian? At least Brian was never in a serious relationship with her. But at least the guys managed to save her, and hopefully this means Brian and Becca will be back together and can actually be a happy family with their daughter. :) On another note, I had a slight problem with how the Feds took Brianna and Becca, mostly because they were just wanting to question her and that approach is a little extreme. Plus she has a right to refuse to talk to them, and they can't arrest her on the spot for that. Maybe you made it that way intentionally to make them corrupt or something, if you did then just ignore the complaint. The update was great though.

SHE'S WITH BRIAN AGAIN, YAY! Though I have to say, my heart literally stopped when the FBI showed up and took Brianna out of her arms. Those assholes. And Tiffany! What a bag! At least she's dead now. LOVED THIS <3

What the... D': no, no, no, no! He can't just leave D': What the hell Brian?? Get your thoughts together, you idiot!
Holy shit, I'm gonna cry! I mean... he cheats on her for fear, he acts indifferent to her finding out, he lets her disappear for YEARS and now that he may have his last chance at making things right he just leaves?? What. the. actual. fuck. ?
I need next chapter. Now. I don't think I can wait any longer :x damn you!

(btw, I totally loved the update :3 you are such an amazing writer! ugh.)

I wanna cry :c that was sad.. but I really hope brian doesn't give up on her that easily!! =) great update!!

Dude, I totally knew he was going to follow her. So the question is- what happens now?

Brian thinking that she was going to leave is no excuse to cheat on her with the whore, when he should have just talked to her. None of this would have happened if he had kept his dick in his pants long enough for her to get downstairs and talk to him.

Oh damn I wonder what's going to happen now that he's seen Brianna?

So he got engaged to the bag he was cheating on Becca with. THAT RAT BASTARD. I am so mad at him right now! Thinking she was going to leave him anyways was no excuse to cheat on her. NO EXCUSE. I wonder if things would be different now if she went back, and if she;d told him about Brianna. I don't blame her for not saying anything though. BUT HE FOUND THEM. He found them, and he saw Brianna! Please update soon! I need to know what he's gonna do <3

I knew that he knew about her leaving. And I guess that explains why he did what he did with that other girl. I'm a little surprised he actually stayed with the same girl after all that time though. I figured that was just a one time thing honestly, and I kind of want to know why he kept her around and even got engaged to her. But now he's seen his daughter, and I'm wondering what that'll spark. Is he just going to let her go or is he going to try to get involved and at least be a part of Brianna's life even if he can't have Becca again? I'm guessing it's more like he'll try to get both of them in the end, but Becca's going to put up an even bigger fight this time because she won't risk something like that again. I just really want to know how he'll go about everything. Can't wait for more.

Wow I cannot believe Syn stuck with the bitch that caused Brian and Becca! Again I say what hell was he thinking???!!! So Jimmy died keeping the secret that Becca was pregnant when she left the manor when she caught Brian with that bitch. And now it seems that Brian knows why Becca trailed off when she said that Jimmy talked her out of leaving. Now he has seen with his two eyes why Becca refused to let Brian become apart of her life again. Not because she is afraid that he will hurt her because of his darker half which tends to come out when he gets angry but because Becca doesn't want to put her daughter through the same pain Brian put Becca through. So only two more chapters, I wonder what Brian will do now. I look forward to the next update!

holy crap... I was not expecting this chapter at all xD but you know what? I'm really glad you made this story this way. You know.. skipping those three years. I think it was very clever (:
and what about brian? is he going to get married ? =/ that sucks and it sucks even more that becca is suffering..
but I'm curious about the next chapter!! Update soon! :D

Brianna is adorable, and I love her name. Though I feel bad for Becca because she can't ever keep away from him, even across the country. And knowing Brian, he won't leave her alone again. I'm not surprised he's moved on though. It's been three years, and he was the one that ran her off. I don't think he could expect to get her back after the second time. But it is still sad that she still got her heart broken again. I'm just curious as to what kind of woman he's with now. Also wondering how he'll react knowing he has a kid, if he doesn't already know anyway. And it broke my heart when he told her Jimmy was dead. :( Loved the update though. :)

awww Brianna is so cute. Damn I had a feeling that the others would be in town when Matt and Val showed up at the supermarket.

Damn Brian's gone and got himself engaged but it's obvious that there's still a spark for Becca with the way he reacted.

Can't wait to read more :-)

Number 1: I LOVE THIS CHAPTER.
Number 2: Brianna is the cutest little thing of life. I love her and I just want to pinch her cheeks and tickle her and keep her safe forever okay.
Number 3: BRIAN. YOU ARSEWIPE. I can't believe it. I just can't. He ruined the best thing that ever happened to him, and how he's moved on and is getting married to some skank? Okay, I don't actually know if she's a skank or not, she could be nice or whatever but she's not Becca. She's not Becca and he's just breaking her heart all over again. And he doesn't even know that he has a kid! What the crap.
Number 4: I LOVE THIS! THANK YOU FOR UPDATING! <3

Uh oh...! So he has a little girl! She sounds cute. I feel for becca, it can't be easy being a single mom, and then running into the guys after three years, and to find out that Brian is possibly engaged. Ouch. She did cell him Syn though so that makes me curious? And first thing he tells her is Jimmy's dead:( so sad! He must have taken her secret to the grave. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update!

What the fuck is Brian doing!???? He is destroying Rebecca all over again. I mean he shows up out of nowhere and apparently engaged to one of his sluts. But on a happier note, she had an adorable girl that is just SO CUTE! Please update soon!!!!!!!!! X3