Blunt - Comments

Please update :)

Please!

Definitely keep writing please!

I would love more updates!! Really looking forward to them :)

Great update! Can't wait to read what happens next!

This story is so good, can't wait to see where it goes!

Love this :) keep writing!

Great update!

Poor Em. :(

Hazza's needs to quit with the clepto tendencies

I like the story so far. I'm interested to see where it goes :)

<i>stupid emotions</i>. Third to last paragraph, remember to use bb code. :)

I think the first chapter is a bit too fast paced, but I am reading further to see if that is what you intended. I wish you would have had her sister meet the boys, since that is why they were there to begin with. Like I said though, I am reading further, because you could cover all this later on. ;)

Just some advice for your writing, when you are writing dialogue, make sure you evenly space out each part of the conversation. Each other person who is speaking should have their own line.

Like this:

"Ugh, how can you even want to be here?" I screamed into her ear.

"I could ask you the same thing," said an unfamiliar husky voice.

Either than that, you have good writing, and a nice idea.

Dangggg I can't over how fiesty she is,I love it!:D
I'm interested to see what goes on next.It seems as though Harry isn't going to be leaving her alone anytime soon.The only caution I would take from here on is making sure you don't rush anything or take too long to get to points in the story,I know personally I've read stories that have gotten one of those ways after the first few chapters and it just kind of ruins the story.Just a little advice:)
More soon would be awesome!:D

Oh, this is amazing! She's so feisty, love it :D

Oh my!
Again you've done an awesome job! Very realistic when they had their awkward date. I loved it because honestly most people expect it to going swimmingly well or be a disaster. It wasn't either so that's refreshing! I love that Emily has no problem being blunt, matches well her lol
I'm a little apprehensive about what's going to happen now since she's looking to cause damage and if her reasoning is going to be just because then that's interesting.
Can't wait for more:)

I freaking adore Emily!:D
I love how feisty she is and how she isn't worshiping the ground Harry is walking on.
Their encounters crack me up.Props to Harry for not getting discouraged though I think he could be holding onto the hope she'll come around.
Also most likely enjoying how she doesn't make a big deal out of him but instead wants him to go away however that's just my assumption haha. That's rough about her job though.I'd be mad since Harry is most of the reason she quit.I'm really excited to see where this goes!
More soon please:)