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  • n. josten

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    I’m here as the new host for ‘The Writing Contest’.

    UGHGUHG I’ve always been so disappointed that you didn’t continue writing this because I was always so intrigued. I actually stopped myself from reading the first chapter for the longest time because I wanted there to be more. I knew the first chapter was going to hook me, and it did. It really, really did. I love the promise that this story has. It’s so dark and morbid and actually just messed up—a family of murderers that help each other—but I’m into it. I want it.

    I love how you started the story, too. Just this chapter is great. I have a good grasp on the backstory even though I wasn’t really given this long, detailed version of it. And while she’s unnamed at the moment, I have a good grasp on the girl. She’s loyal and it shows in the final line about having to help Alek clean up. I only got a glimpse of your writing style, but just with that, it was simple but detailed and had a consistent flow. It was very enjoyable.

    I hope you continue this one day!
    July 4th, 2017 at 10:56pm
  • maybe okay

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    Love the start of this story. Also, the layout is gorgeous.
    November 24th, 2013 at 10:54pm
  • maybe okay

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    oops, double comment
    November 24th, 2013 at 10:53pm
  • Roden.

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    I read this while listening to Placebo on the soundtrack page. You probably wrote the first 2 chapters to go with the first two songs, but for some reason Placebo fit. I could picture the scene, with the song , quite perfectly. It could easily be seen as a movie, as well, that scene with the camera.

    I love Bates Motel, too. So, this story will be exciting. Also, I love the title and layout.
    November 24th, 2013 at 05:12pm
  • lovely youth

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    okay, i am really looking forward to reading this.
    November 8th, 2013 at 05:02pm
  • Forever.In.Ink

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    This is interesting - Please do continue I look forward to reading more
    September 27th, 2013 at 06:13pm
  • dystopianobsession

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    Really awesome plot you've come up with, and very well-written introduction! I'm very excited to read the next chapters you post. Very Happy
    September 27th, 2013 at 06:58am
  • kahlo

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    NORMAN FROM THE BATES MOTEL
    NORMAN
    MY BABY
    NORMAN
    i'm sobbing silently until you decide to update.
    i'll leave you with that unsettling thought.
    please update.
    like now.
    like RIGHT now.
    please.
    yes.
    April 21st, 2013 at 06:15pm
  • hellsbelle

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    I'm really excited to read this!
    April 8th, 2013 at 03:08am
  • n. josten

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    Oooh, I can't wait to read this, you don't even understand.
    April 7th, 2013 at 09:32pm