I'm not sure how I feel about this story. At first I was liking it though I thought it was gong a little fast, but then I don't know something about it is just strange to me. I like your characters and how you have developed and are developing them and the plot is good, but I don't know, maybe it's because I feel your story has moved quicker than I thought it would. I'm definitely going to continue to read though and subscribe.
May 5th, 2013 at 06:53pm