this is really good. I do like Lou. It's sad that they had started to part more & more. So i'm sure this was a desperate attempt for her to get him back into her life, even if just as friends. And Gena...damn hoebag Dx
Damn that was some way to tell Zacky that the whore cheated - the poor guy :-(
"You touch my boyfriend, and I'll knock the silicon out of your tits faster than you can say 'bloody hell'," she growls. Hahahaha - oh man I love this line :-)
Damn, Zacky has the hots for her something bad. I love how he thought of flying at her and ripping off her towel.
Ooh, I wonder if they're gonna remember anything in the morning???? :-)
I saw this coming from a mile away. I think Lou is awesome though,better than the cheater he has back home. I hope this doesn't make it all weird and awkward for them though:S
This is a really great start and I love the original idea. I can't wait fir mire. Seems Zacky might be in for some trouble when it comes to Lou. Lol update soon!
A great start! The beginning already has me hooked and i love it. I can not wait to read what happens in Vegas. You know what they say, What happens in Vegas stays in Vegas.
I just fell in love :D I love Lou, she's so awesome! This story seems to have a great potential, with the original idea and your amazing writing skills. I can't seriously wait for more!! Update soon!