Hey there. Xd The comment swap thingy brought me to this story of yours. It wasn't something I would pick to read and while reading it, I got confused a lot. You were just describing things as a person and wrote it was a journey to find his/hers self/soul. I honestly don't know what to say about this, maybe its because my english aren't good enough but I didn't get it. You had great grammar and use of vocabulary though. C: That's all I can say so bye from me. ~Marian.
January 13th, 2013 at 04:36pm