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  • Shi!

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    Hi, it's me again!
    I've just spent my entire morning classes at university reading more chapters from your story. So far, I've made it until chapter 15. Mr. Green

    Okay, let me just tell you, I don't like Mitchell. So far, he doesn't seem like a bad character, but there's something about the way he acts and talks that I just can't seem to like. Even after surpassing the fact that he's Micah's father and only comes to visit him once in a blue moon, there's still something about him that makes me dislike him.

    Up until now, from what I read so far at least, Gerard's relationship with Cyren is not really a relationship yet, but I love their little moments! The driveway part was awkward, but definitely funny!

    So, now that everything is said, I'm going back to catching up on your story!
    March 5th, 2015 at 05:10pm
  • Shi!

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    Hey there! I've just started reading this and I love it! I guess you haven't updated it in a while, because it was the first time I stumbled upon it. Wink
    I've only read the first six chapters, but I have to tell you that I love the whole story concept and I absolutely adore Frank's personality. The daycare scene made me smile like a fool. Mr. Green
    I hope you keep on writing this, I'll keep on reading it whenever I get a chance!
    March 4th, 2015 at 10:31pm
  • Vampire vengeance

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    Gosh I really love the way you write you get her thoughts out in a some what poetic way but its not over done. I can't wait for the next update so please make it soon your driving me insane. Very Happy
    September 3rd, 2014 at 12:56pm
  • secrets-that-die

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    Yay an update :) can't wait for more to come
    September 2nd, 2014 at 08:33am
  • antisocial_kinsey6

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    Yay!!! Thank you for updating !! This is my favorite!
    September 2nd, 2014 at 07:38am
  • MaiiDesuu

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    First let me start off by saying WELCOME BACK !! Eeek thank you for this update Mr. Green I really really missed your writing AND this story ! I can't wait to see what's around the corner for cyren and gerard
    September 2nd, 2014 at 06:16am
  • ayegeeox

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    omg i almost died when i got the ema update about the new chapter. Please update ofteen <3
    September 2nd, 2014 at 02:47am
  • Harley91594

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    I really hope she and Gerard end up together, they would be cute together!
    September 2nd, 2014 at 02:43am
  • Vampire vengeance

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    You have no idea how excited I was to see this story updated! I can't wait for more!
    September 2nd, 2014 at 02:14am
  • ayegeeox

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    I've been waiting forever for an update. omg you do not know how happy i am. I hope you update more often now :))
    August 10th, 2014 at 06:59am
  • gnarly.

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    AHHH, this story is back and the update made me incredibly happy, you have no idea.

    I'd like to say that relationship Cyren has with her mom is tense but that's what makes it so raw and realistic and I only think it's going to continue like that.

    You know, I still have no idea where this story is going or how it's going to end, but I'm totally read for whatever comes next because tho is. Very well though out story!

    I'll be waiting for the next update patiently!
    August 8th, 2014 at 11:21am
  • LucyLove

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    This story though. Love it. Love it. Love it. Can not wait to read more.
    August 8th, 2014 at 12:28am
  • LucyLove

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    Ohemgeeee... This story. Love it. Love it. Love it. You're writing it how it should be written: carefully and playfully.
    August 8th, 2014 at 12:26am
  • antisocial_kinsey6

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    I love this!!
    May 14th, 2014 at 07:47am
  • Harley91594

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    Their mom is an interesting character. It's weird to see her interact with her children so coldly, but at least she is trying.
    May 12th, 2014 at 02:18am
  • cryptid mother.

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    UGHHHH. Please please please update soon. Please.
    May 11th, 2014 at 08:02pm
  • secrets-that-die

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    Yay you updated :) love this story. Update more often (:
    May 11th, 2014 at 03:43am
  • never-told-a-lie

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    This is amazing i love it, update it soon its TOO GOOD I CANT STOP THINKING ABOUT IT <3
    May 8th, 2014 at 12:02am
  • seabluelight

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    love itttt updaate soon
    April 17th, 2014 at 06:13am
  • cryptid mother.

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    UGH. I LOVE I LOVE I LOVE OKAY? It makes me so happy. ;-;
    March 6th, 2014 at 01:29am