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  • vampireangel216

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    LOVE IT!!!!! I just started reading it and i couldn't stop
    February 7th, 2013 at 07:12am
  • katieboo!

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    This is a great story and i can't wait for the next update!
    February 7th, 2013 at 06:46am
  • katieboo!

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    This is a great story and i can't wait for the next update!
    February 7th, 2013 at 06:46am
  • The Cult That Kills

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    Keep writing. This story is addicting.
    February 7th, 2013 at 06:10am
  • xShadows

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    This is so amazing! Your writing is spectacular. Please update again soon :)
    February 7th, 2013 at 06:07am
  • MermaidSlur

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    Ah! Was so freaking happy when I saw this update!!!!!!! I can't wait til Cy and Gerard actually meet :D <3
    February 7th, 2013 at 05:47am
  • cryptid mother.

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    So, this should be updated, because it's kind of maybe a little bit awesome. :D
    February 6th, 2013 at 04:10am
  • TwistedByTheStars

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    Ah I read this and I was SOOO amped up for the guys meeting Micah and hanging out and then bam, no more chapters. Damn!
    February 5th, 2013 at 06:33am
  • Beautiful-Disaster!?

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    update please ^-^ Cute
    January 23rd, 2013 at 06:11am
  • MermaidSlur

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    Cant wait to see what happens when they hang out :D super excited to see how this story progresses :D <3
    January 23rd, 2013 at 04:52am
  • MermaidSlur

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    When will we be seeing another update?:3 <3
    January 23rd, 2013 at 03:35am
  • gnarly.

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    Oh my gosh, another amazing chapter, and I'm quickly becoming addicted to this story even if it's only four chapters in, but I'll wait patiently. I'm really loving the pace it's going at, taking the time to build relationships, which makes it more believable. Though, I sort of dislike Ryder, I think she's quite interesting and definitely adds to the story. Overall, like I said, another great chapter, and I can't wait to read the next one.
    January 16th, 2013 at 07:38am
  • brynjamin

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    Damn . I'm usually not too big on band fanfics- but I'm digging this a HELL of a lot . Love your characterizations and the plot line looks promising ;) Can't wait to see what happens, well done !
    xobryn
    January 16th, 2013 at 04:09am
  • Shelley.aquilina

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    This fan fic seems really good so far and I am heaps interested to see what you got in stall :) update quickly can not wait !!! :D
    January 15th, 2013 at 06:00am
  • gnarly.

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    Ugh, oh my gosh, I wrote up an awesome, detailed comment and when I submitted, it didn't go through. So irritated.

    Anywho, I'm really happy that I came across a Gerard Way story since I've been trying to find a good one the last couple of days. Usually, I'm iffy on high school era fics, but I was like what the hell and gave it a chance, and like I said, I'm definitely happy. I really like your OFC, and how she's developing quite nicely, even if it's just three chapters in. I like that you made her a young mother, which usually is a thing most authors tend to steer clear of, but it's good that you gave her a 'flaw because it's believable. Also, I really like your writing, it's definitely detailed, but still easy to follow/understand. Another this is your dialogue, it's well put together and it flows nicely, so good job. Overall, I'm excited for this story and can't wait to see where you take it.

    Keep up the good work!
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    January 14th, 2013 at 11:01am
  • Shelley.aquilina

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    In hooked ... :) you got a really good plot and all it's amazing keep updating can't wait to read more :D
    January 10th, 2013 at 12:57pm
  • spotiedotie

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    Ohhhh I love it already just the two chapters got my hooked :)
    January 8th, 2013 at 02:39am
  • Join the Masquerade

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    Meeting Gerard probably won't be the best thing for her... interesting XD
    January 8th, 2013 at 01:44am
  • semolina

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    Awww she has a bebe :3 I love it so far!
    January 8th, 2013 at 01:38am
  • cryptid mother.

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    This is really good! I'm excited to see where it goes, however I did notice at one point you wrote 'nine month year old' and it threw me off. Just thought I'd let you know. Can't wait for the next update! Mr. Green
    January 8th, 2013 at 01:27am