Death-Wish Kids - Comments

LOVE IT!!!!! I just started reading it and i couldn't stop

This is a great story and i can't wait for the next update!

This is a great story and i can't wait for the next update!

Keep writing. This story is addicting.

This is so amazing! Your writing is spectacular. Please update again soon :)

Ah! Was so freaking happy when I saw this update!!!!!!! I can't wait til Cy and Gerard actually meet :D <3

So, this should be updated, because it's kind of maybe a little bit awesome. :D

Ah I read this and I was SOOO amped up for the guys meeting Micah and hanging out and then bam, no more chapters. Damn!

update please ^-^

Cant wait to see what happens when they hang out :D super excited to see how this story progresses :D <3

When will we be seeing another update?:3 <3

Oh my gosh, another amazing chapter, and I'm quickly becoming addicted to this story even if it's only four chapters in, but I'll wait patiently. I'm really loving the pace it's going at, taking the time to build relationships, which makes it more believable. Though, I sort of dislike Ryder, I think she's quite interesting and definitely adds to the story. Overall, like I said, another great chapter, and I can't wait to read the next one.

Damn . I'm usually not too big on band fanfics- but I'm digging this a HELL of a lot . Love your characterizations and the plot line looks promising ;) Can't wait to see what happens, well done !
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This fan fic seems really good so far and I am heaps interested to see what you got in stall :) update quickly can not wait !!! :D

Ugh, oh my gosh, I wrote up an awesome, detailed comment and when I submitted, it didn't go through. So irritated.

Anywho, I'm really happy that I came across a Gerard Way story since I've been trying to find a good one the last couple of days. Usually, I'm iffy on high school era fics, but I was like what the hell and gave it a chance, and like I said, I'm definitely happy. I really like your OFC, and how she's developing quite nicely, even if it's just three chapters in. I like that you made her a young mother, which usually is a thing most authors tend to steer clear of, but it's good that you gave her a 'flaw because it's believable. Also, I really like your writing, it's definitely detailed, but still easy to follow/understand. Another this is your dialogue, it's well put together and it flows nicely, so good job. Overall, I'm excited for this story and can't wait to see where you take it.

Keep up the good work!
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In hooked ... :) you got a really good plot and all it's amazing keep updating can't wait to read more :D

Ohhhh I love it already just the two chapters got my hooked :)

Meeting Gerard probably won't be the best thing for her... interesting XD

Awww she has a bebe :3 I love it so far!

This is really good! I'm excited to see where it goes, however I did notice at one point you wrote 'nine month year old' and it threw me off. Just thought I'd let you know. Can't wait for the next update!