Reminiscent - Comments

  • This was so gorgeous, wow.
    January 29th, 2013 at 08:27pm
  • Amazing one shot :)
    It was very heartfelt. It's sad that Brian lost the love of his life and the last memory he had of her was of them arguing and telling each other that they hated each other. You can tell that Brian has suffered alot after his loss with so much regret but I'm glad in the end he was able to go visit Allie and let her know how he really misses her and regret their last moment together.
    January 13th, 2013 at 07:19am
  • This was amazing! Good luck in the writing contest!
    January 12th, 2013 at 06:42am
  • Wow, this had me on the verge of tears. I can't imagine having to live with that kind of guilt. That's awful. But this was beautifully written and it's not often that stories make me choke up. Well done. I loved this. [:
    January 11th, 2013 at 11:12pm
  • Wow. This was so beautiful in a tragic kind of way. Great writing! This almost made me cry! Good Luck with the contest:)
    January 11th, 2013 at 06:35pm
  • This was really good and heartfelt. You could feel how much regret and guilt Brian was suffering. It's horrible how things ended between them and to know that he could never have her back in his arms again, to make up for the things he did and never said or did say.

    Sometimes sad and depressing stories are better, to me I always prefer bad endings because it gives you more drama, intrigue and it's not all rainbows and fluffy clouds.

    You should really be proud of this, I could tell that you put a lot of work in it!
    January 11th, 2013 at 01:43pm
  • This was really good and heartfelt. You could feel how much regret and guilt Brian was suffering. It's horrible how things ended between them and to know that he could never have her back in his arms again, to make up for the things he did and never said or did say.

    Sometimes sad and depressing stories are better, to me I always prefer bad endings because it gives you more drama, intrigue and it's not all rainbows and fluffy clouds.

    You should really be proud of this, I could tell that you put a lot of work in it!
    January 11th, 2013 at 01:43pm