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  • airplanes__

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    I liked it :) I loved the attention to detail and some lines really stood out to me ("she really would be the end of him, but what a way to go" or something along those lines). Plus, Warrior is one of my favorite movies so I definitely enjoyed the Tom Hardy hotness that was this story LOL. Reading the sequel now!
    August 29th, 2013 at 09:49am
  • LauRa- ReaDing-XoX

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    I really enjoyed this story, your so great at writing and it was simply a mary sue kind of story, it was something else. Going to read the ssequel now.
    July 25th, 2013 at 12:02pm
  • kaeeluhhh

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    this story was incredible. i have been rereading Broken and Faith over and over again! Please write another story soon!!
    March 27th, 2013 at 01:09am
  • velveteenrabbit

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    So I read the first two chapters of your sequel not even knowing there was a story before it, but I'm so glad I read. I loooooooved this, it was perfection and probably my favorite tommy story that I've read so far. Their relationship was perfect. Amazing job!
    March 20th, 2013 at 09:29pm
  • vonhejibergen

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    I just want to let you know that this story was amazing :) and thank you for doing a sequel!
    March 17th, 2013 at 10:17am
  • dcsays

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    wahhhh!!! I started reading this on another site and found the completed version on here. and I'm so happy I did! love love love the story. it's different than the many other ones I've read, interesting story line and ofc which is refreshing. a sequel would be amazing. I never want stories to end bc I'm a greedy bitch haha I'll have to look into more of your work. great j
    March 2nd, 2013 at 01:40am
  • ginger

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    This story is amazing, and I've read it too many times. Jade and Tommy have such an amazing chemestry/relationship, I just want to keep reading about them forever! Sequel?(:
    February 27th, 2013 at 04:30am
  • absolutenerd17

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    This was absoluting amazing, I didn't do any psychology revision because of you but it was well worth it! It was beautifully written, their relationship developed just right and I loved how she didn't take shit from anybody; it's hard to find that particular characteristic written so well in a female character these days! But I hope you do make a sequel though, I shall wait somewhat patiently :)
    February 24th, 2013 at 11:21pm
  • jacqwoods85

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    Just discovered this site and this story. I truly hope you do a sequel! This was amazing!
    January 28th, 2013 at 12:25am
  • SerenitySpeaker

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    Of all the Tommy Riordan fics ive read, this was my favorite. It was so well done!
    January 23rd, 2013 at 03:03pm
  • oshie

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    i loved this story to pieces and i can honestly say that i think the way it ended does justice to the story of tommy and jade.
    January 22nd, 2013 at 04:45pm
  • Lloyd Christmas

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    Awww I loved it from beginning to end
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    Awesome ending Mr. Green
    January 22nd, 2013 at 08:35am
  • scute

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    "and no one had shit on Tommy when it came to a death glare" literally burst out laughing at this point, then proceded to google a picture of it because it was just too funny.

    i'm so extremely sad this is done. however, i do love ending. usually i'm all about sequels and whatnot, but i think that the way you ended this story, it doesn't need a sequel. jade and tommy are happy and nothing needs to change :)

    great job on the whole thing!
    January 22nd, 2013 at 07:59am
  • twisted.vengeance

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    You're almost done with this story? D': nooooooo!
    January 22nd, 2013 at 06:37am
  • scute

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    girl, you post the ending to this story right now or else you are going to have one VERY unhappy lady over here!
    January 22nd, 2013 at 06:19am
  • Lloyd Christmas

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    You scared me thinking this was the last chapter. Omg you haaaaave to update nooooow!
    January 22nd, 2013 at 05:48am
  • Dasiygirl95

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    OMG 0_o.....She better be OK!!!!

    Only one more chapter? :( I'm so sad now....

    Update soon
    January 22nd, 2013 at 04:26am
  • oshie

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    uh, jade better be okay so she and tommy can have cute babies. can't wait for more! love this so much
    January 22nd, 2013 at 02:56am
  • scute

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    YOU CAN'T LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT
    January 21st, 2013 at 10:27pm
  • lucky009

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    ahhhh.... are you insane? you can't stop the chapter there...I really want to know what happens next, before I have to go to bed (I live in germany)

    I'm truly obsessed with this story
    January 21st, 2013 at 09:52pm