Broken - Comments

okay so i love this. i was hesitant about the whole fighting thing at first, but now i'm obsessed and kind of wanting to taking a kick boxing class? and lets just talk about getting hot and bothered in the bedroom... DAMN GIRL. can't wait for more of this!

this story is seriously badass and you're an updating machine!! i love it. can't for more!!! :D

You're cruel. Unless you update again in like .083620 seconds then I take it back. I hope she doesn't get all girly confused and be all distant after,
They need to be a couple already so they can make wonderful angry, fighting babies. That is my opinion

oh my god, you added hockey into this.... i actually love you right now. hahaha but yeah, whats the solution to this andrew problem!?

Oh yea and I wonder what his solution to the Andrew situation would be...

Can you believe I'm actually jealous of her. Like she's so lucky it's silly OMG I loved this!

Whoooo! :D

A date, and another kiss!!! :D

Loved it! Update soon!

I'm really loving this story!! It's awesome!! Jade and Tommys relationship is adorable <3

Loved it! :D

I love that you brought Brendan into the story!

Update soon! :D

I love how they are getting closer! (: Moreee!

oooo, i just adore this story! i love their dynamic and now bren trying to get caught up to speed. can't wait for more!

I adore their relationship so hard. Insanely hard. I hope they get closer so if ya know what I mean

He's so sweet !
Update soon!

Ahhh! He showed up :O Omg! Love love love!

Sorry the codes didn't show I forgot to space it out. But like this [ b ] [ / b ]
Without the spaces [ i ] [ / i ]

Awesoooome. I so wanted Tommy to crush that man, but I suppose
That has to wait. Love it!!!

And to do bold and italicized you write these codes
around the words you want.

Awwwww

Yet another amazing chapter. I love this one, I could literally feel the desperation in jade's voice as she questioned if she was too forward and I could hear the pounding of her heart. Update soon!

Whooo! Loved the kiss! :D

Update soon! :D

Yes!!!!
That was too awesome and damn relieving.
So I'm guessing Tom doesn't want to train her any more because he doesn't want to hurt her because he likes her a lot. Idk just saying whatever comes to mind.
I absolutely can not wait for the next chapter.
Loved it!