Hearts On The Floor - Comments

Gahh I'm sorry :( But I shall update soon :)

AHHHH JIMMY!!!!!!!!!!! Geez that rape scene was so horrible :( update soon please!

No problem :)

Thanks for the advice! I really appreciate it. I was worried myself that it was getting a little too predictable and sped up, so thanks for telling me! <3

I really am enjoying the plot in this story, it's told well. However, my one complaint is that everything is going so quickly, there's only 3 chapters in this story so far and I already know the majority of the plot-line and I have a feeling as to where it's going. It's a little predictable, so throw in a major twist there, that will make it a better story. But otherwise it's really good!!! I can't wait for an update!!! :D <3