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  • Loudness War

    Loudness War (100)

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    You had a great flow, it went for utter euphoria to a feeling of depression. I especially liked them last paragraph were she was coming down. All in all it was very well written.
    February 5th, 2013 at 01:50am
  • CaroCaro

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    I love this! I think it suits the picture perfectly, and I don't know why but the last line really hits me, it feels so eery. The descriptions are really lovely and ht home as well. Well done! If you could teach me how to get the photos from the contest into a layout I'd be super grateful, yours looks great. Good luck!
    January 19th, 2013 at 07:47am
  • leprechaun_katt

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    Gargh amazing. Detail is wonderful and your writing flow is so fluent and I really enjoyed it. In a way, I want to know more about the character and want you to continue but obviously you can't. But this too good of a story, so I'm recommending Mr. Green
    January 17th, 2013 at 09:01am