Velvet Crowbar - Comments

I just sat here when i finished this being all happy and excited
im glad u gave them a happy not so ending ending.
and if it was another girl from his past he saw heads will roll.
i want the sequellllll!
loved it as usual

I have NO idea who it was! Ugh, I love this story, so so much. I can't get enough of it and I don't want it to end. I want to find out who that woman was!

Heart. Ripped. From. My. Chest
As much as I love you and this story
I seriously dislike you at the moment
this was sad.
but well deserved on his part.
mooooore

Don't mind me crying over here... Ughhhh how could tommy mess up like that?! I'm just dying to see where you take this

.....okay thank you for making me cry
and ripping my heart out with each word
more please
because im sad over this

Really really excited for the next chap please update sooon

Oh. God. The tears.
that was so not okay
and i expect an update.
this was sad
moreeeee

omgosh, just read all six chapters in one sitting. i can't wait for the sequel, consider me subbed! great writing, your words create a very vivid & clear picture.

they. took. her. dress. then tommy has to go be a jerk! ugh.

Whut da actual fuq?

Oh my god, my heart is racing! Please, please update again soon!!

Please updat fast! Must know what happens! Great story

HE WHAT?! ooooo i just hate tommy right now. I mean, obviously i dont, but i do. fkawjefclkjghlakeh you're killing me

I'm in love with this story!!! Please update soon :)

omg YES this is fucking amazing! <3

umm absolutely amazing!
as usual
and sequel definitly.
baby fighters :3
mooooore

Yes to the sequel !!

AHH!!!! oh my gosh.
i need more now
because they are NOT allowed to break up.
Like EVER
just no
mooooore

Twy just need to go to Vegas and get married!

Oh my word. That ending? You gave us THAT ending? If they break up I'm going to be devastated!!!!!