The Way the Road Feels - Comments

Aw, this was sweet. The interactions between Tom and Jon were really sweet and I love how they contrast with each other. The connection to the photo was done really well and I love how this just flowed really nicely. I can't really fault this, it was a nice and simple read but still super interesting. Thanks for entering!

Hi bb. You finally wrote me Tom and Jon fic. So grateful. SO GRATEFUL.

“Sleep,” Tom insists, and Jon can’t argue.

Cause Tom loves Jon but he doesn't say it so he shows it by taking care of him instead. God Tracy.

“You ever miss home?” Tom whispers.

“I don’t,” Tom says, too quietly, and Jon stops.

Tom. What's so bad at home Tom? Or do you just want Jon and that's it? I want that too.

Tom’s cigarette ashes into his hair, but he doesn’t move away

So much bearded dork love. I mean what even is that small gesture that means a whole lot?

He smiles into the darkness and Jon smiles back.

They're so happy with what they have it doesn't even matter that they're notsleeping in the back seat of a car. That's so perfect Tracy, Jesus. It's so perfect. You nailed it. Like NAILED IT. Jesus, Tracy, Jesus.

I like this. This is actually the first piece I've actually read from you and I like your writing style. It's different and to the point if that makes any sense. It's not too discriptive or simple. It's right and gets the message across. I like the similarities and differences of both Tom and Jon. One is light and the other dark. Their relationship was sweet and I liked that this wasn't a long chapter because there actions in just little time showed a lot about how they cared or don't care for each other.

Good job! :-)