This story was awesome!! I loved all of it!!! Matt was prefect through out the entire story. I love how Madison was thick girl and how both Matt and Bri both found her attractive. I like how Bri called her juicy! Lol
I started reading this the other day on my break at work, got hooked from the very first chapter, I love it. I love that Madison is curvy, so many stories I read the female characters are skinny and perfect, it's very refreshing to read a story where, not only does she have insecurities just like just about every other female on the planet, but she doesn't let them stop her.
I love Matt in this, he is such a sweetheart! I must confess that I was hoping she would get with Brian at first, (Brian obsessed girl right here, not even sorry haha) but the way you write her and Matt together, I switched sides and started rooting for her and Matt to get together.
Brian was a little bit of a douche to begin with, but like so many men XD I kinda thought he and Layla would end up getting together, I was hoping so anyway haha. I have to say, I love the way you write Jimmy too, just the right amount of crazy and adorable! :D
Kudos to you for the attack scene, I thought you wrote it really well, very real and believeable, my heart broke for poor Madison :( But I like that you didn't rush her back to how she was before the attack, it just doesn't work like that so I thought you handled that well :)
And can I just say, you shouldn't worry about your smut writing, it is very very good! Haha. Those scenes with her and Matt in the shower, WOW XD
Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed this story, sad to see it over but now I shall go and read your other stories :D
Had to unsubscribe because my subscription page is too full buuuut I think they story was amazing and I am in fact reading your new story with Matt and Brian in it and it does seem to be more smutty :) but it works and I like it too. I can't wait to see here you take it
Well that was a perfect ending to this story. I've loved it from start to finish. I would love you to write a story about Layla and Brian, if you're up for it. It wouldn't have to be tremendously long if you didn't want it to be. I'd definitely read it cos I loved this story so much. I hope you'll consider it anyway xx