@ Pia782 Do you mean as in making paragraphs? Because I did that, so I don't know why it doesn't show up when you view it. It looks perfectly fine on my laptop :/
Oh snap crackle pop and a half..... I'm glad that she liked the bracelet. :-) It sucks that her father is getting out but I know that Vik and Pat will do everything they can to keep her safe. I'm also glad that Pat will finally know what happened to her. I think that if her father shows up and tries to do something to her, the whole team will stand up for her. :-D
Yay! So glad Vik is back!! :-D I think that Jane and Vik need to sit down and talk about how he wants more and she needs to admit that she wants more too, I have a feeling that she will freak out and be like No! I have built the walls around my heart too high and I'm afraid to commit to a relationship because of what happened in my past. And Vik will be like, Baby, I'm not like your parents, I will never hurt you! Give me a chance!! And she will be like.... ok. And they will live happily ever after. :-) Lol.
Great chapter. I'm glad that Jane was finally able to confide in Viktor. I think it was good for both of them. It sucks that she had to go through that at such a young age but I'm glad that she was able to eventually get out of the situation. On one hand I hope that Jane's father doesn't show up because she shouldn't have to see the piece of shit ever again but on another hand I feel that he should feel what he did to a defenseless child at the hands of at least a few if not a whole team worth of pissed off hockey players. Can't wait to see how it plays out.
I don't know why, but it doesn't show on my ipad... it is my fault then, I guess.. Sorry :)