March 5th, 2013 at 08:29am
Well, I have tears in my eyes. Bravo! Ahaha
This was really good and I love how you brought in 'Sempiternal' at the end :')
This story is really well written, with good descriptions. I really like how you've made the reader totally understand how the main character is feeling.
The layout is really nice and easy to read, which I love!
This is a great story, and really sad.
Thanks for your comment. Im glad you liked it! :)