Best of BC13 - Comments

Also, I think it would be nice to put in more info about your main character, so the reader can get to know her better. Also, describing the setting (explaining where the characters are and what the place looks like) is nice, too. And, this is optional- not a neccessity- but if you want you can create profiles for your characters including pictures bios and more. Don't make it a part of the story, though (you can get reported for that). There's a special place here on Mibba that you can use to do that (if you need help, let me know). If you want to, you can do this so in case you get any readers who haven't heard of BC13, they can look at the profiles and learn more about them. But, it's not neccessary.

Also, Mikl's real last name is Montgomery? Where did you hear that from? I didn't even know that, lol.

But, I love this story. PLEASE update!!!!

Hi there! I'm the girl from Twitter that read your story. I like this story so far. I love BC13! However, there are a few things I want to point out...

1. Chapter 1 is Only one paragraph long. It's a pretty big paragraph at that. When a different character is speaking, you have to make it a new paragraph. Every time. For example:

Character one: "Blah blah."

Character two: "Blah blah blah."

Character three: "Blah."

Character two: "Blah blahblah blah."

You have to do this because on Mibba, stories that don't have paragraphs end up getting reported if the wrong person reads it and decides to report it. Then, sadly, it gets deleted. We don't want that to happen. If you're typing your story in a word document on your computer, to start a new paragraph, you have to hit the button that says "enter" twice.

2. When using tags such as: I said, he said, she said, they asked, he screamed, etc., you have to use a comma. Stories can get repored fo this, too. For example:

"I think that's cool," he said.

I replied, "I think that's dumb."

However, if using an exclamation point or a question mark, the comma isn't neccessary. For example:

"Wow!" he exclaimed.

"Did that really happen?" she wondered.

3. Text talk (lol, jk, omg, wtf, stfu, etc.) isn't allowed on Mibba stories. This can end up being reported, too. I'm only saying this because I say "Omg" somewhere in the story.

Other than that, it was great! I just don't want it to get reported.