Hi! My name is Becca, and I'll be your new judge for the Ed Sheeran Plus Contest via Mibba's Contest Revival!
My absolute favorite thing about this piece was how completely relateable it is.
When I'm sick, there are maybe two people on the planet I'll let catch a glimpse of me, but letting my boyfriend/significant other is kind of a nightmare. Admittedly, this piece was fluffy- but I loved it. Logan was the definition of the perfect man in this particular piece. You managed to capture a sweet, innocent moment in a relationship so many people seem to pass right over. It was so effortless and so well written.
My absolute favorite thing about this piece was how completely relateable it is.
When I'm sick, there are maybe two people on the planet I'll let catch a glimpse of me, but letting my boyfriend/significant other is kind of a nightmare. Admittedly, this piece was fluffy- but I loved it. Logan was the definition of the perfect man in this particular piece. You managed to capture a sweet, innocent moment in a relationship so many people seem to pass right over. It was so effortless and so well written.
Your grammar was just shy of impeccable.
Overall, this was a great piece.
Bravo!
Thank you for entering, and good luck!