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  • Bloody Bandit

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    AWESOME CHAPTER! I loved it so much.
    April 25th, 2013 at 04:41am
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    Yay! <3
    April 25th, 2013 at 04:32am
  • vashappeninsuperman_

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    @ dizzydreamer2000
    ask and you shall recieve Smile
    April 25th, 2013 at 03:42am
  • Bloody Bandit

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    Update please :)
    April 25th, 2013 at 01:48am
  • Chikaylah

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    I really love this story so far. Its great :) youre very talented at writing ♡♥♡♥
    April 6th, 2013 at 02:27pm
  • missdemeanorluv

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    Ahh I got so excited when I saw this updated! It's been awhile :) awesome chapter! Can't wait for more
    April 6th, 2013 at 02:12pm
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    @ WhiskeyPrincess
    thanks soo much
    February 26th, 2013 at 01:30am
  • dropdeadsebring

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    The feels! <3 Love this.
    February 25th, 2013 at 10:36pm
  • vashappeninsuperman_

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    Thanks so much.your comment means so much to me.I'm definitely giving you a shout out on the next update
    February 24th, 2013 at 05:52pm
  • utopian-mess

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    I've just read the whole story and gosh, this is pretty good! I can't wait to read more!
    February 24th, 2013 at 03:06pm
  • vashappeninsuperman_

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    @ on your side;
    Thanks Soooo much!I knew I went to the best for some reason.Thanks for the tips!and thanks for commenting!
    February 1st, 2013 at 12:05am
  • DELETETHISPLEASE

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    hey! so i saw you asked me to check this out! so i did! it's not bad, and the more you write the better you'll get at it, trust me. practice makes perfect. she calls him osito like jace does! he is a teddy bear. i guess my suggestions is to space the layout a bit, it makes the chapter longer and it's easier to see where something starts and ends. like any time there's dialog, space it so it's forming a new paragraph almost. just look at my chapters to see what i mean. (: and like i said before, the more you write the better you get. because trust me when i say i used to be the shittiest of shit shit authors. seeing where i'm at now is amazing but i still have a lot of improvements to make too haha!
    January 31st, 2013 at 09:39pm