Summer - Comments

I seriously want it to be summer after reading this. Like I can't even. This was so perfect, the whole time I was reading I could just see myself back at the shore with my younger sister and it was like...I can't explain it. This story made me so ridiculously happy. I mean, just happy and nostalgic and everything. It was perfect. And I have no criticism because none exists.

Well firstly, I'm kinda mad about how much I want summer right now >:l But seriously, this was perfect. The layout is adorable, and just fits with the whole theme of the story. I like how relatable this is. All of the word choices were perfect and everything flowed so nicely, ugh I really want summer now! Your descriptions were vivid and I could picture everything that was happening. I like how this is a story but not a typical story. Like it didn't really have set characters or plot, it was just a montage of summer. It was seriously amazing, I love it! :)

Well firstly, I'm kinda mad about how much I want summer right now >:l But seriously, this was perfect. The layout is adorable, and just fits with the whole theme of the story. I like how relatable this is. All of the word choices were perfect and everything flowed so nicely, ugh I really want summer now! Your descriptions were vivid and I could picture everything that was happening. I like how this is a story but not a typical story. Like it didn't really have set characters or plot, it was just a montage of summer. It was seriously amazing, I love it! :)